Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Kaitlyn's mystery

I gave Kaitlyn a story starter for her to complete and thought I would share her story she wrote.

Last night I had the most wonderful dream! And it was like this. I heard something. It was my Mom. I went back to sleep. I wok up and I saw I was in a candy shop. It was filled with licorish, chocleete eggs, popcicles, and gumy bears and I wok up it was morning. I was bak home. I was just a dream

Is it really the end?

I thought it was pretty good for a 7 year old. I especially love the twist at the end. Can you tell she reads a lot of Nancy Drew? :)

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